Sunday, June 22, 2008

Hush

Listen carefully

Look inwards

For God speaks

In quiet whispers

8 comments:

Vyzz said...

Hush!

I can hear him.

:D

It could most probably be me, but then again, i'm not listening closely ;)

Vyzz

Anil P said...

Yes, the whispers. What a coincidence, indeed.

Preeti Sharma said...

Vyzz - Oh well, then it's probably you thinking just a little too loudly:)

Anil - Whispers, coincidence? I'm a little lost....

slo said...

i suck at short poems which is why i can really appreciate one! To compress such a huge thought into such a tiny verse without compromising on its meaning, now that IS DEFINITELY SOMETHING!!!!

Preeti Sharma said...

Slo - So happy you liked.

Mamma mia! Me a mamma? said...

LOVED THIS! Simple and serene then suddenly a twack in the gut! Truly awesome!

Preeti Sharma said...

B,
Have always wanted to write something peaceful and meaningful. This is my attempt at graciousness in poetry.
P

Mamma mia! Me a mamma? said...

Then let me tell you, you have succeeded!